tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5171670007828382529.post2788203117037460404..comments2024-02-06T15:18:05.390-06:00Comments on Writing Off the Edge: G is for GraveL.G. Keltnerhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07624902347418621283noreply@blogger.comBlogger16125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5171670007828382529.post-31285797394478864292014-04-18T12:11:56.972-05:002014-04-18T12:11:56.972-05:00I also was surprised at the ending.I also was surprised at the ending.Bevimushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14924337684790883853noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5171670007828382529.post-9542450261538569082014-04-16T13:37:30.291-05:002014-04-16T13:37:30.291-05:00Gave me a little chill, well done!
Donna B. McNic...Gave me a little chill, well done!<br /><br />Donna B. McNicol<br /><a href="http://dbmcnicol.blogspot.com" rel="nofollow">A to Z Participant</a>Donna B. McNicolhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15209611782116113024noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5171670007828382529.post-57104319719398291172014-04-12T21:37:29.401-05:002014-04-12T21:37:29.401-05:00Yep you pulled it off! Was not expecting that!Yep you pulled it off! Was not expecting that!Achieve1dreamhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15401246064499148344noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5171670007828382529.post-67250886368726579022014-04-09T23:53:19.872-05:002014-04-09T23:53:19.872-05:00Great job. Whoa, his own name? Hopefully his grand...Great job. Whoa, his own name? Hopefully his grandfather who gave him his name and not his own name and he's seeing it ... maybe already dead? Wow, great job in just a few lines. <br /><br />Visiting via A to Z from <a href="http://passthesourcream.com/series/a-2-z-2014/" rel="nofollow">Pass the Sour Cream</a>Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05714929594179137473noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5171670007828382529.post-35282036994304749092014-04-09T20:47:54.730-05:002014-04-09T20:47:54.730-05:00Love it! I could picture this scene perfectly. Wel...Love it! I could picture this scene perfectly. Well done! ~JaxDani and Jaxhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16372278565146521904noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5171670007828382529.post-37717007564270747622014-04-09T11:02:46.254-05:002014-04-09T11:02:46.254-05:00Those first two lines are so simple, yet so absolu...Those first two lines are so simple, yet so absolutely potent. Placed me right in the scene with almost no words at all. Splendid job!randi leehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14207001299508931034noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5171670007828382529.post-8508939566770453312014-04-09T09:11:25.516-05:002014-04-09T09:11:25.516-05:00I love that - really quirky but tells us so much a...I love that - really quirky but tells us so much about the character in so little time! Great drabble. Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5171670007828382529.post-2307047032681840942014-04-08T19:37:25.321-05:002014-04-08T19:37:25.321-05:00It's like checking out the dining room in a ho...It's like checking out the dining room in a house you're planning to buy. You have to make sure it will accommodate the guests you're planning on entertaining.C.D. Gallant-Kinghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01080400727631587101noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5171670007828382529.post-73538084900267940622014-04-08T17:06:57.093-05:002014-04-08T17:06:57.093-05:00That was a bit different... :)That was a bit different... :)Fehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18344347287087639537noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5171670007828382529.post-91465584523990794132014-04-08T12:58:03.233-05:002014-04-08T12:58:03.233-05:00Interesting. I wasn't expecting that ending. I...Interesting. I wasn't expecting that ending. I love surprises.debi o'neillehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00326849099713939434noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5171670007828382529.post-41232025137591460712014-04-08T11:48:15.993-05:002014-04-08T11:48:15.993-05:00That is different.That is different.Nana Prahhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12854685637338591856noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5171670007828382529.post-69103919437943387842014-04-08T11:26:58.033-05:002014-04-08T11:26:58.033-05:00Nice twist at the end there - I wasn't sure wh...Nice twist at the end there - I wasn't sure where you were going to go with it! Kyra Lennonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13853462182450429660noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5171670007828382529.post-47252418296785801992014-04-08T06:45:05.269-05:002014-04-08T06:45:05.269-05:00A little morbid, but to each his own!A little morbid, but to each his own!Alex J. Cavanaughhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09770065693345181702noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5171670007828382529.post-57948731639812128382014-04-08T03:03:28.116-05:002014-04-08T03:03:28.116-05:00Like Sophie, the ending surprised me. It didn'...Like Sophie, the ending surprised me. It didn't sound like drabble to me. Rhonda Albomhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17455873487349816911noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5171670007828382529.post-37919992900524952972014-04-08T02:53:17.786-05:002014-04-08T02:53:17.786-05:00My word today is Grave too :) Good drabble. I find...My word today is Grave too :) Good drabble. I find your protagonist's motivation very strange - clearly he likes to empathise.<br />Tasha<br /><a href="http://tashasthinkings.blogspot.co.uk/" rel="nofollow">Tasha's Thinkings - AtoZ (Vampires)</a><br /><a href="http://fantasyboysxxx.blogspot.co.uk/" rel="nofollow">FB3X - AtoZ (Erotic Drabbles)</a>Tasha Duncan-Drakehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12591239019422681163noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5171670007828382529.post-68044766261810491232014-04-08T00:59:27.737-05:002014-04-08T00:59:27.737-05:00Now that I wasn't expecting - that is one prep...Now that I wasn't expecting - that is one prepared guy.Sophie Duncanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14768033409563305140noreply@blogger.com