tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5171670007828382529.post3941115700813171728..comments2024-02-06T15:18:05.390-06:00Comments on Writing Off the Edge: N is for NewcomerL.G. Keltnerhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07624902347418621283noreply@blogger.comBlogger13125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5171670007828382529.post-66908300706828398082014-04-18T11:59:17.960-05:002014-04-18T11:59:17.960-05:00Love that last line!Love that last line!Bevimushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14924337684790883853noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5171670007828382529.post-52911432274329499802014-04-16T20:22:19.304-05:002014-04-16T20:22:19.304-05:00Love the idea of a human being the alien amidst ot...Love the idea of a human being the alien amidst other "foreigners".Trishahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16927558937796802496noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5171670007828382529.post-72941717068252150222014-04-16T19:53:41.103-05:002014-04-16T19:53:41.103-05:00Interesting vignette. Well done. Those five senten...Interesting vignette. Well done. Those five sentence pack a power of story. I should wander over there and take a look. <br /><br /><br /><br />http://ceciliaaclark.blogspot.com.auCA Clarkhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17847165518615193237noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5171670007828382529.post-57445156796365560572014-04-16T14:12:34.071-05:002014-04-16T14:12:34.071-05:00Short and packs a punch!
Short and packs a punch!<br />Michelle Wallacehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02750092836481599870noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5171670007828382529.post-20709948993768829412014-04-16T13:28:09.783-05:002014-04-16T13:28:09.783-05:00I love how you turn it around in the end: "I ...I love how you turn it around in the end: "I am the alien here." Nicely done!randi leehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14207001299508931034noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5171670007828382529.post-37583839784847047932014-04-16T11:44:42.263-05:002014-04-16T11:44:42.263-05:00I bet anyone would feel like a newcomer in that si...I bet anyone would feel like a newcomer in that situation. Laura Clipsonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02748489198957473503noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5171670007828382529.post-14961263830378060672014-04-16T10:14:49.435-05:002014-04-16T10:14:49.435-05:00Never defend or explain a joke or pun. It's j...Never defend or explain a joke or pun. It's just too bad if someone doesn't get it!<br />Strange feeling being the Newcomer in a group of aliens. Hope they are friendly. Love your little scenarios.<br />Donna Smith<br />The A-to-Z Challenge<br />http://mainelywrite.blogspot.com<br />Mainely WriteDonna Smithhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13738281869266957726noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5171670007828382529.post-26624631347375604162014-04-16T09:22:14.579-05:002014-04-16T09:22:14.579-05:00Loved the last line, nice sense of separateness.
B...Loved the last line, nice sense of separateness.<br />Bad jokes don't need defending, they just need a good groan ;P<br />Sophie<br /><a href="http://sophiesthoughtsandfunmbles.blogspot.co.uk/" rel="nofollow">Sophie's Thoughts & Fumbles</a> - A to Z Ghosts<br /><a href="http://fantasyboysxxx.blogspot.co.uk/" rel="nofollow">Fantasy Boys XXX</a> - A to Z Drabblerotic<br />Sophie Duncanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14768033409563305140noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5171670007828382529.post-78631412322046285982014-04-16T08:56:10.082-05:002014-04-16T08:56:10.082-05:00At least he's in familiar territory.
And I was...At least he's in familiar territory.<br />And I was a military brat, so I know the feeling.Alex J. Cavanaughhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09770065693345181702noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5171670007828382529.post-28425714500533288742014-04-16T08:07:39.402-05:002014-04-16T08:07:39.402-05:00Wow, that is definitely a big newcomer. How does o...Wow, that is definitely a big newcomer. How does one go about being diplomatic with an alien species? The pun was funny too :)<br />Tasha<br /><a href="http://tashasthinkings.blogspot.co.uk/" rel="nofollow">Tasha's Thinkings - AtoZ (Vampires)</a><br /><a href="http://fantasyboysxxx.blogspot.co.uk/" rel="nofollow">FB3X - AtoZ (Erotic Drabbles)</a>Tasha Duncan-Drakehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12591239019422681163noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5171670007828382529.post-33221372363791947112014-04-16T07:18:17.728-05:002014-04-16T07:18:17.728-05:00New kid in class rather pales to new species on th...New kid in class rather pales to new species on the planet. And btw, I enjoyed your bad joke. :)Jean Davishttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02047709505502621618noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5171670007828382529.post-81269995634538907102014-04-16T05:01:09.323-05:002014-04-16T05:01:09.323-05:00Love the way it ends :) -- a human is an alien in ...Love the way it ends :) -- a human is an alien in other worlds!<br /><br />Damyanti, Co-host <a href="http://damyantiwrites.wordpress.com/2014/04/16/atozchallenge-flashfiction-never-in-her-life-did-she-think/" rel="nofollow">A to Z Challenge April 2014, My Latest post</a><br /><br />Twitter: @AprilA2Z<br /> #atozchallenge<br />Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04283371140346602856noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5171670007828382529.post-37401371932238071882014-04-16T02:19:25.980-05:002014-04-16T02:19:25.980-05:00I love how you don't just stick to the norm wh...I love how you don't just stick to the norm when you think of a topic - these twists are cool! Kyra Lennonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13853462182450429660noreply@blogger.com