tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5171670007828382529.post2619578902543935066..comments2024-02-06T15:18:05.390-06:00Comments on Writing Off the Edge: P is for Peace and Write, Edit, PublishL.G. Keltnerhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07624902347418621283noreply@blogger.comBlogger20125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5171670007828382529.post-29331312515346839662017-04-24T01:01:31.748-05:002017-04-24T01:01:31.748-05:00I very much enjoyed your poem. Excellent writing! ...I very much enjoyed your poem. Excellent writing! J Lenni Dornerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07961335286982498158noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5171670007828382529.post-71028650264908933912017-04-22T16:20:56.492-05:002017-04-22T16:20:56.492-05:00Very nice, and so true. We yearn for peace, but to...Very nice, and so true. We yearn for peace, but to try and get everyone to agree is a feat for the magicians, or perhaps the Jedi.. .Good for you, doing the A to Z and the WEP!D.G. Hudsonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06213237734772028645noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5171670007828382529.post-21059901003220784742017-04-20T03:55:53.770-05:002017-04-20T03:55:53.770-05:00This is a fantastic poem, I love the ultimate mess...This is a fantastic poem, I love the ultimate message that is sends out, plus I'm a sucker for a good rhyming poem. Laura Clipsonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02748489198957473503noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5171670007828382529.post-3568768659093093002017-04-19T18:33:37.719-05:002017-04-19T18:33:37.719-05:00Nice writing. I remember you from past writing ven...Nice writing. I remember you from past writing ventures.<br /><a href="https://mcguffysreader.blogspot.com/2017/04/put-little-love-in-your-heart.html" rel="nofollow">Put a Little Love in Your Heart</a><br />Annie at <a href="https://mcguffysreader.blogspot.com" rel="nofollow">~McGuffy's Reader~</a> Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5171670007828382529.post-53370490174680634082017-04-19T16:57:02.967-05:002017-04-19T16:57:02.967-05:00You did a beautiful job! Captured the word wonderf...You did a beautiful job! Captured the word wonderfully! Too bad, today it's only a word and not reality. If only kindness were practiced more!<br />Excellent! <br />Thank you, Laura, for your participation. The WEP wouldn't be the same without you! You continue to amaze and surprise, although, I don't know why? You are one talented writer! Congratulations on all the books listed in Yolanda Renéehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09085436784133103221noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5171670007828382529.post-82863539979856028662017-04-19T13:24:17.642-05:002017-04-19T13:24:17.642-05:00Very nice.
I can't think of "Peace"...Very nice.<br /><br />I can't think of "Peace" without remembering that when my son was 2, his favourite song was "Peace" by Depeche Mode. :-/<br /><br /><a href="http://www.cdgallantking.ca/2017/04/p-pussy-black-face-and-margaret.html" rel="nofollow">P - Pussy Black-face and Margaret Marshall Saunders</a>C.D. Gallant-Kinghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01080400727631587101noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5171670007828382529.post-69188320549381604192017-04-19T11:44:40.246-05:002017-04-19T11:44:40.246-05:00I loved your poem.
NancyI loved your poem. <br />NancyN. R. Williamshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02174506528962095858noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5171670007828382529.post-56601869095199433662017-04-19T10:39:56.378-05:002017-04-19T10:39:56.378-05:00A great verse indeed that took seed. A little kind...A great verse indeed that took seed. A little kindness and pushing on through, can keep away any shades of blue.Pat Hatthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07745293224202430152noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5171670007828382529.post-43631933660298840252017-04-19T10:19:11.261-05:002017-04-19T10:19:11.261-05:00Poet or not, I enjoyed that. Very well done.Poet or not, I enjoyed that. Very well done.Crystal Collierhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03912469552483168148noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5171670007828382529.post-81482028745533102042017-04-19T08:41:42.201-05:002017-04-19T08:41:42.201-05:00Are you sure poetry's not your forte? Because ...Are you sure poetry's not your forte? Because you created a very uplifting and hopeful vision of peace in just 100 words. Very well done!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06017756012813695025noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5171670007828382529.post-8274980864880769462017-04-19T07:26:37.124-05:002017-04-19T07:26:37.124-05:00A beautiful, warm piece, L.G.. I feel good after r...A beautiful, warm piece, L.G.. I feel good after reading that. Thank you for sharing.Nicolahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14674648154579013578noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5171670007828382529.post-53454404496202806802017-04-19T04:53:47.330-05:002017-04-19T04:53:47.330-05:00Hello,
I like the rhyming very much and the contra...Hello,<br />I like the rhyming very much and the contrasts that you paint about peace. <br />An excellent message. <br />Shalom aleichem,<br />Pat G<br /><br />P.S. Good luck with A to Z. Pat Garciahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04204650731843984192noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5171670007828382529.post-80440180163433995052017-04-19T04:36:35.379-05:002017-04-19T04:36:35.379-05:00Brilliantly done in polished couplets. Kudos! This...Brilliantly done in polished couplets. Kudos! This was a treat to read. Can't accept that poetry isn't a strong area for you. Combined the A-Z and WEP with such effortless ease, too.Nilanjana Bosehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08656370320322301943noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5171670007828382529.post-17856054327631829492017-04-19T04:12:29.852-05:002017-04-19T04:12:29.852-05:00I loved your poem and can't quite believe that...I loved your poem and can't quite believe that you aren't good at writing poetry. Such a lovely simple message of peace. Now I wish all our collective peace energy in writing about it brings about peace. <br />Kalpanahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02503951641129389045noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5171670007828382529.post-30760814651931949922017-04-19T03:41:11.875-05:002017-04-19T03:41:11.875-05:00Lovely messages in your poem. Lovely messages in your poem. Sallyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14090018804016223955noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5171670007828382529.post-23899623375508364572017-04-19T02:15:56.320-05:002017-04-19T02:15:56.320-05:00Very well done LG.Very well done LG.dolorahhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08715849844092553699noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5171670007828382529.post-44437762746087348722017-04-19T01:43:51.705-05:002017-04-19T01:43:51.705-05:00Truly lovely.
I believe kindness should be spread ...Truly lovely.<br />I believe kindness should be spread like confetti and loved ' Kindness is the seed we sow<br />With the wish that it should grow'Elephant's Childhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06650565833097914052noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5171670007828382529.post-73260167642553287432017-04-19T01:43:27.376-05:002017-04-19T01:43:27.376-05:00What a great poem. I love the rhythm of it, and a ...What a great poem. I love the rhythm of it, and a fantastic message, of course. :)<br /><br /><a href="http://saracsnider.com" rel="nofollow">A to Z 2017: Magical and Medicinal Herbs</a><br />Sara C. Sniderhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16148040154590535970noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5171670007828382529.post-46771292118738321232017-04-19T00:28:27.684-05:002017-04-19T00:28:27.684-05:00L.G. Great poem. It may not be your genre of choic...L.G. Great poem. It may not be your genre of choice, but you created words of wisdom in your rhyming couplets. Especially loved: 'Strength of character and conviction<br />Carry us on despite affliction...' Today, we need those strengths in ever-increasing measure.<br /><br />Thanks for being so creative for WEP. It paid off to extend yourself!<br /><br />Denise :-) Denise Covey https://www.blogger.com/profile/07106490051555233439noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5171670007828382529.post-29421624830600938332017-04-19T00:26:04.071-05:002017-04-19T00:26:04.071-05:00Great poem. The first line sets the mood, and the ...Great poem. The first line sets the mood, and the entire piece grows from it. Olga Godimhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00358026814685611301noreply@blogger.com