It's time for another Five Sentence Fiction. Lillie McFerrin's prompt for this week was business.
For those who are behind on the "Unchained" story can read it in it's entirety on this PAGE.
Unchained
Chapter 6: Business Plans
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Ylana
ran the body brush over her hairless scalp, fashioning elaborate swirls of decoration
from purple, yellow, orange, green, red and pink paints. The business of the day would take them to
the planet Nevaris, and she wanted to look her best when she set foot on an
alien world for the first time.
“We’re
going to be landing in a few minutes,” Nara announced from the open doorway of
Ylana’s modest quarters. “I’m sure this
has to be exciting for you.”
With
a nod and a conspiratorial grin, Ylana replied, “Nevaris is home to the
greatest enemy of the Kryllians, so I have the feeling I’m going to be learning
a lot more there than how to get the best trade for your medicinal skin
cream.”
great 5 sentences!! and such a good pic to correspond with it!
ReplyDeleteWeek by week, chapter by chapter, I look forward to the unfolding of Ylana's destiny.
ReplyDeleteGood continuation.
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JzB
I like it. Very colorful imagery.
ReplyDeleteI'm enjoying the five sentence pieces I'm seeing today. Keep it up. :)
ReplyDeleteNice writing. been keeping up with your weekly posts.
ReplyDeleteAs ever, great telling of a work I always crave more of - I hate you! GIVE US MORE! ;)
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