I am immensely excited to invite you to imbibe the drabble I've inked for the letter I. Wow, it isn't easy to imagine that many words that begin with I and avoid making my sentences incomprehensible.
Anyway, enjoy!
Ignite
“I’m a phoenix,” she whispers. Her warm breath caresses my chilled flesh,
making me shiver. “Ignite me, and I’ll
be reborn.”
I have no idea what she’s trying to say, probably because
someone spiked my drink. This whole
night’s been strange, but now I’m too hazy to care.
The campfire has dimmed, casting shadows about the pasture,
and I wonder if we’re truly alone in this bizarre moment.
“Make me burn,” she calls to the sky as she dances away from
me. She begins to twirl, her red and
yellow dress fluttering in the breeze, the fire illuminating the material.
I like the duality of sensuality and fire in this one.
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The haze of inebriation - I do hope she doesn't get too close to the fire. Beautiful imagery.
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ReplyDeleteGreat post! Good luck with the rest of the challenge xx
That was really good. I'd like to read more about it.
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Dude, take the open invitation!
ReplyDeleteThere is always something so magical and compelling about the phoenix.
ReplyDeleteBeautifully written piece!
ReplyDeleteCan't really blame him for being confused. Love the red and yellow dress fluttering in the breeze.
ReplyDeleteBeautifully written.
ReplyDelete"Probably because someone spiked my drink" really caught my attention! What can I say? Another wonderfully written bit of work!
ReplyDeleteOoo, I love this description! It's a short bit that immediately catches your interest. Wonderful!
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Lovely, fiery, and passionate. Yum! =D
ReplyDeleteI definitely pair passion and fire often in my own writing, and I'll be back for more!
Very well written! Love the descriptions.
ReplyDeleteLove this!! Good job on your I post.. I had trouble with mine lol. I wasn't very imaginative when it came to I. :)
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