Here's another drabble. I wanted to capture some of the excitement of young love and the anticipation that comes along with it. Enjoy!
Midnight
Miles was shocked by the note in his locker.
Meet me at midnight under
the oak tree in the park and say you’ll be mine.
The note wasn’t signed.
As he navigated the halls between classes, he observed everyone, hoping to
catch a fleeting glance, searching for any clue as to who his admirer was.
Hours later, after his parents had gone to bed, Miles
slipped out of the house and headed to the park. The cool evening air couldn’t chill his
heated skin. His heart pounded in his
ears as he spotted the silhouette leaning against the tree trunk.
Oh, oh, you managed to capture the excitement alright - WHO is the silhouette - enquiring minds want to know?
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Go Miles! I'm dying to know what happens next and what he feels when he finds out who it is.
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Oooooo...need more...much more....
ReplyDeleteWho was it???
ReplyDeleteI agree with the others....I want to know who it is too.
ReplyDeletehey! you left us hanging!!
ReplyDeletegreat drabbles! knockout is my fave!
and happy birthday to your 5yo - they do grow up so fast, changing, changing, changing!
happy a to z-ing!
I think you effectively captured the young love you were trying for and in a drabble- awesome job! Visiting from A-z
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Love this snippet! It's so fun. I wonder if it's someone he's going to be pleased about, or not so much?!
ReplyDeleteExcitement well captured but the story should not end here :-)
ReplyDeleteOh I love this! Definitely captured 'young love' here!
ReplyDeleteWho was it . . . we have to know. Well done. Wonderful M.
ReplyDeleteAH! You left me hanging! NO! Need to know who it was!
ReplyDeleteWhere can I read the rest of the story?
ReplyDeleteGreat suspense!!
ReplyDeleteI do hope it really was a secret admirer and not some terrible prank...when will we know?
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Who is he going to meet? You can't just leave us hanging!
ReplyDeleteMaybe I've seen way too many horror movies but mind immediately takes this to a dark places where something really, really bad happens to Miles.
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