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Unchained
Chapter 10:The Devotion
Chapter 10:The Devotion
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“My
colleague Orton will be joining us shortly,” N’Goteth explained as he sipped a
fluorescent yellow beverage from a jeweled goblet. “He’s the scientist who freed my people of the
Kryllians by devising a way to permanently alter our physiology to be hostile
to them, and he can do the same for you.”
Nara
gazed at Ylana, and placing a gentle hand on her trembling knee, added, “Orton
truly can help you, but you must be devoted to the cause, because his help
comes with a price.”
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I wonder what the price will be...great chapter, as always!
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Nicely written. I do wonder what the price will be too.
ReplyDeleteShould we be cautious about getting help?
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ReplyDeleteThis is a real saga! Love it! :)
ReplyDeleteReally creative and interesting take on the prompt. I loved the vivid imagery of the cluttered living room and the tension between the people. And great cliffhanger ending!
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