Today is the first day of the Spooktoberfest blogging event! My thanks to Jackie @ Bouquet of Books and Dani @ Entertaining Interests for hosting this. These girls know how to concoct a good blogging time!
This event lasts from now until October 29th. I'm posting today because my enthusiasm was simply too much for me to wait any longer than that! I encourage anyone who hasn't signed up to take on the challenge. There's still time to whip up something sinister!
What are the rules?
Requirements:
1. Your Flash Fiction piece cannot be any longer than 300 words. Sorry… that’s part of the challenge. It can be scary, comical, romantic, whatever you choose. Just be creative!
2. You must use the MANDATORY 5 words listed below
cobweb(s)
cauldron(s)
jack-o-lantern(s)
ghost(s)
razor(s)
3. Post your Flash Fiction piece on your blog anytime between ...
Friday Oct. 26 - Monday, Oct. 29th. The contest ends at 11:59 p.m. Monday.
4. Follow Dani and Jackie if you don’t already. They will follow back.
5. It’s a blog hop, so hop around to other participating blogs and leave some awesome comments when the stories are posted.
6. Have fun!
I wanted my story to be scary. Halloween is just around the corner, after all! So here you go. I hope you enjoy it!
Carving
Jaclyn
emerged from the chloroform fog. Cold
leather straps dug into the skin on her wrists and ankles, pinning her to a
hard wood table. Darkness crept into
every corner of the room, so she couldn’t get a clear view of anything. What she did see, though, was a row of
shelves to her right that identified it as the old storage room. Cobwebs clung to the boxes, proving
their disuse.
Off
to her other side, she spotted a faint red glow. Turning her head, she could hardly believe her
eyes. “Is that . . .?” she whispered,
unable to finish the sentence. Yet her
eyes didn’t deceive her. A small cauldron was boiling on a hotplate.
A face hovered into view above her. The twisted smile enhanced the features of her
colleague, Dr. Lessner. He had the typical mad scientist, gravity-defying white hair. She felt the look made him look more like a caricature of a scientist than a scientist. Jaclyn assisted him in creating plant hybrids. Pumpkins were the latest project. With their alterations, a carved pumpkin would last much longer, prolonging Halloween enjoyment.
“What
are you doing?” she asked, unable to steady her trembling voice.
“Taking
care of a problem.” He pulled a razor blade from his pocket. “The pumpkins showed me our error. They’re in pain, you see.”
“Huh?”
“The
ghosts of the slaughtered will haunt
us in hell,” Lessner growled. He lifted
her shirt and pressed the blade against the soft skin of her stomach. “Jaclyn, have you ever been carved like a jack-o-lantern?”
Jaclyn
looked on in horror as the blade punched through her skin, releasing the blood
beneath.
Lessner
laughed gleefully. “Afterwards I’ll boil
your innards and make you into a pumpkin pie.
You’ll know their anguish, as I now do.”
299 Words
ARGH! That was really creepy! Great job!
ReplyDeleteOh nasty mad scientist! ^__^
ReplyDeleteEEeee! That's gruesome! Perfect for Halloween :)
ReplyDeleteGaw! Bleh! Eesh! Perfectly perfect horror! Now this is something I would of written if I wasn't so sick last week. Nice job!
ReplyDeleteOK, so I see I am not the only one who thought pumpkins don't really enjoy being carved up and have their innards removed to be made into pumpkin pie. Great creepy story.
ReplyDeleteWow and OUCH. Great story.
ReplyDeleteewwww! now thats a mad scientist! great scary story!
ReplyDeleteThat is twisted!
ReplyDeleteOh the horror, love the horror. Mad scientist, and 'human' pie. Excellent!
ReplyDeleteThanks for the story. I love the Mad Scientist angle. You made me shudder.
ReplyDeleteVon L Cid
Ooh creepy! Very well done :)
ReplyDeleteHoly shnikes! *shudders* Amazing job!
ReplyDeleteThanks for participating in our blogfest. :D
Yikes! I demand a sequel telling us how she gets out of this awful situation! Nice work on creating a truly awful mad villain!
ReplyDeleteThe cutting *cringes*
ReplyDeleteNice work. I was really creeped out by the mad scientist.
Ohhhh, gross!! haha. I sure hope she gets rescued!
ReplyDeleteI love the illustration of his nuttiness by the fact that he talks about the pumpkins' pain and their feelings.
Yowza! Great mix of the terrifying with the absurd, LG!
ReplyDeleteMina's Resurrection Blogfest!
Nice to meet you. Scary stuff. He crossed the line I guess and she didn't realize it until it was too late.
ReplyDeleteI read the post above too, well done.
Nancy
He definitely went a little mad! Yuk!
ReplyDeleteDarkly comic. I liked it!
ReplyDeleteVery creepy and gruesome! Great story!
ReplyDeleteChilling. Absolutely chilling! A great tale to tell in the dark.
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