Thursday, November 15, 2012

FSF: Business Plans

It's time for another Five Sentence Fiction.  Lillie McFerrin's prompt for this week was business.

For those who are behind on the "Unchained" story can read it in it's entirety on this PAGE.

Chapter 6: Business Plans

Image courtesy of bearvader
Ylana ran the body brush over her hairless scalp, fashioning elaborate swirls of decoration from purple, yellow, orange, green, red and pink paints.  The business of the day would take them to the planet Nevaris, and she wanted to look her best when she set foot on an alien world for the first time.

“We’re going to be landing in a few minutes,” Nara announced from the open doorway of Ylana’s modest quarters.  “I’m sure this has to be exciting for you.”

With a nod and a conspiratorial grin, Ylana replied, “Nevaris is home to the greatest enemy of the Kryllians, so I have the feeling I’m going to be learning a lot more there than how to get the best trade for your medicinal skin cream.”


  1. great 5 sentences!! and such a good pic to correspond with it!

  2. Week by week, chapter by chapter, I look forward to the unfolding of Ylana's destiny.

  3. I'm enjoying the five sentence pieces I'm seeing today. Keep it up. :)

  4. Nice writing. been keeping up with your weekly posts.

  5. As ever, great telling of a work I always crave more of - I hate you! GIVE US MORE! ;)