Here is my latest piece of Five Sentence Fiction. The prompt for this week was ALONE.
Alone
in the Deep
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The sound of my own labored breathing is the only
accompaniment to my frantic thoughts. My
mind keeps cycling through the same disturbing mantra, threatening to drive me
to madness before I can reach my own end: “They’re
all dead, and it’s my fault.”
The black depths of space mirror my state of mind perfectly
as I think about how I brought this upon us all, and that if I had listened to
the captain when she argued that it wasn’t safe to bring a stranger on board
her ship, none of this would have happened.
I meant well, striving as always to help others, but that
brings me no comfort now as my own death draws near. As the low oxygen warning flares to life, the
alarm mingles with my ragged breaths, and it will continue to fill my spacesuit
until it is the only sound that remains.
Well done! Killer last line!
ReplyDeleteI good space story in just five sentences! Good job!
ReplyDeleteReminds me of Bradbury, very well told story in so few words.
ReplyDeleteWell done - feels mostly complete and in very few words.
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