When I sat down to write this drabble, I knew I wanted to use the word "grave" for inspiration, but I didn't want it to be a typical story about someone visiting a grave. I hope I pulled that off.
Grave
The gravesite was nicely manicured. Visitors tended to feel comforted by
well-tended cemeteries.
Stan shoved his hands into his coat pockets, his eyes wandering
over the headstones surrounding him.
“Is it weird that I’m here?” he wondered aloud, knowing that
no one else was there to hear him. “I
told my best friend about this, and he laughed.” He knelt down in front of the headstone,
tracing the name with his fingers. His
name. “What can I say? I’m going to be buried here someday. I want to know what it’ll be like for my
family to visit me.”
Now that I wasn't expecting - that is one prepared guy.
ReplyDeleteMy word today is Grave too :) Good drabble. I find your protagonist's motivation very strange - clearly he likes to empathise.
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Like Sophie, the ending surprised me. It didn't sound like drabble to me.
ReplyDeleteA little morbid, but to each his own!
ReplyDeleteNice twist at the end there - I wasn't sure where you were going to go with it!
ReplyDeleteThat is different.
ReplyDeleteInteresting. I wasn't expecting that ending. I love surprises.
ReplyDeleteThat was a bit different... :)
ReplyDeleteIt's like checking out the dining room in a house you're planning to buy. You have to make sure it will accommodate the guests you're planning on entertaining.
ReplyDeleteI love that - really quirky but tells us so much about the character in so little time! Great drabble.
ReplyDeleteThose first two lines are so simple, yet so absolutely potent. Placed me right in the scene with almost no words at all. Splendid job!
ReplyDeleteLove it! I could picture this scene perfectly. Well done! ~Jax
ReplyDeleteGreat job. Whoa, his own name? Hopefully his grandfather who gave him his name and not his own name and he's seeing it ... maybe already dead? Wow, great job in just a few lines.
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Yep you pulled it off! Was not expecting that!
ReplyDeleteGave me a little chill, well done!
ReplyDeleteDonna B. McNicol
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I also was surprised at the ending.
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