This is another drabble that turned into a poem instead. Once again, it's still exactly 100 words. It just came out as a poem. I can't always control what results from my creative madness.
The inspiration for this came from frustration. I've seen so many people who are judged harshly for their past, often unjustly, and the results can be devastating for some. We are none of us perfect. The experiences we have had may not win the approval of all, but for better or worse, they've made us who we are.
Purity
White dresses, flowers,
golden
childish
dreaming.
Innocent you must
remain,
they all command.
As you grow, you
learn,
human needs
prevail.
In a moment, it’s
undone,
childhood is
over.
A burgeoning wisdom,
unfolds,
takes root
within.
Life is not so
simple
as others
pretend.
Yet others persist,
learning
of your
knowledge.
Tainted, unclean,
filthy,
the insults fly.
Who would want you
dirty
as you now are?
The judgments come
one
by one, cutting.
Words fill your life,
you
cannot escape.
They taunt you, judge,
define
and it takes a
toll.
Some will not rest until,
broken,
you agree with
them.
meh--why control it? It's more fun when we let it control us!
ReplyDeleteBeautiful poem, and so very true. Words hurt more than people let on.
Excellent job! This is sort of fitting for Leah in Game On lol.
ReplyDeleteWe can't let our past determine who we are.
ReplyDeleteThat last verse,
ReplyDeleteSome will not rest until,
broken,
you agree with them.
is devastating.
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Such moving words and so important.
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Nice drabble as always. People always judge and it's horrible that they sometimes don't even want to give the benefit of the doubt.
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Perfect P-poem per poetry period.
ReplyDeleteReally poignant.
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