It's time for Five Sentence Fiction! The word Lillie provided for this week is HOME.
If you haven't read previous installments of this serialized story, you can find the entire narrative on this PAGE.
Unchained
Chapter
35: Home of Nara's Final Hope
The goggles of fate were surprisingly lightweight considering
the revelatory power they supposedly contained.
Ylana settled them in place as she knelt beside Nara’s bed, one hand
resting gently upon her ill friend’s arm.
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The images in front of her began to shimmer and shift, and
little fragments of the world around her rearranged themselves to create
something new. Now she gazed upon a
dilapidated little house that was nestled at the base of a towering hill.
She didn’t know where it was, but a sense of conviction rose
up in Ylana’s chest, and she knew that this tiny little home, wherever it
happened to be, was Nara’s final hope of survival.
I never realized 5 sentences can hook you into a story. Good one, I'll be back...
ReplyDeleteThat's great. So hard to capture a story in such a short time. You did it!
ReplyDeleteNice! Posting on A-Z Road Trip!
ReplyDeleteKaty Did
This is really a great story you have "chained" together!
ReplyDeleteUm....MORE PLEASE? :)
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