For those who would like to read my post for Celebrate the Small Things can find it HERE.
The awesomeness that is Spooktoberfest is made possible by Jackie @ Bouquet of Books and Dani @ Entertaining Interests.
For those who are interested in joining up, here are the details!
For those who are interested in joining up, here are the details!
Requirements:
1. Follow Cover Girls blog if you don’t already. It will be reciprocated!
And on Twitter: @covergirlsdj
You can also follow our individual accounts: @jackiefel & @danibertrand
If you have a Twitter account, please feel free to use the hashtag #spooktoberfest14
2. Your Flash Fiction piece cannot be any longer than 300 words. Sorry… that’s part of the challenge.
3. You must use the MANDATORY 5 words listed below…
(You may use any variation of these words as you like.)
chill
cocoon
commotion
curse
virus
4. Post your Flash Fiction piece any day from Friday Oct 24th thru Tuesday, Oct. 28th.
5. It’s a blog hop, so… hop around to other participating blogs and leave them some awesome comments.
6. Have fun.
Your flash fiction piece can be scary, comical, romantic, or whatever you choose, just be creative! You can use pictures to set the scene and/or a song to set the mood.
The winners will be posted on HALLOWEEN, Oct. 31st!
Jackie and Dani will each choose a winner. That’s right – two winners! PRIZES: Each winner will receive a $25 e-giftcard of their choice.
My entry is exactly 300 words. What can I say? I have a hard time restraining myself sometimes. It took longer to cut my story down to 300 words than it did to write the first draft, but since that's part of the challenge
Infection
It’s
dark because I can’t open my eyes. I try
again, but they’re stuck shut by some kind of slimy goop.
“The
test subject Amy Rohan is 10 years old.
She will henceforth be designated as Patient 8347.” The voice is deep. It’s a man, and he sounds even more
unfriendly than my neighbor Mr. Horace.
There’s a commotion to my left (commotion was
our vocabulary word in school last week). It's the rustle of fabric.
“The
injection’s ready.” This voice is
softer, a woman’s, and her words send a chill
through me. They’re going to give me a
shot. I hate shots.
A pain in my left arm makes me jump, but I can’t move far. Straps are holding me still. My eyes are watering, but the tears can’t get
out.
“The
experimental serum was administered at 1430 hours,” the man says. “8347 started exhibiting symptoms of the Hillson
virus 48 hours ago. We hope to ascertain whether the serum, in
combination with immersion therapy, can be effective at this stage of infection.”
My
heart squeezes painfully. Mom's called Hillson
virus a curse since it took Daddy
away. If I’m sick now . . . is Mom sick
too?
A
piercing squeal startles me, and I’m moving.
My stomach flutters, and I know I’m going downward. Something cold and wet hits my skin. It’s too thick to be water, and it smells
like floor cleaner. My eyes are still
closed, but it’s getting darker somehow.
My heart speeds up as the wet stuff flows over my face.
Holding
my breath, I wish I was cocooned in
my blankets at home. Mommy would read me
a story. I’d be safe there.
Soon
my lungs are burning. I need to breathe,
but if I do . . .
I
gasp and the icy sludge fills my chest.
Ooh yuck. Great use of the words!
ReplyDeleteaww that poor little girl. A horrific insight into what it's like to be a human test subject. Great piece :)
ReplyDeleteHoly moly, what's next?! Talking about trying to catch your own breath while reading this! Wonderful entry. Thanks for doing Spooktoberfest again this year.
ReplyDeleteWould love to see what happens next!
ReplyDeleteSounds like she's in dire straights! What next?
ReplyDeleteYuck, drowning is my worst fear. The cure seems worse than the virus. good job on the creepyness and world building LG.
ReplyDeleteThis creeped me out.
ReplyDeleteOMG love this!!!!!!!!!! Love love love. Awesome story.
ReplyDeleteWow. Wickedly creepy story!
ReplyDeleteThe feeling of being suffocated terrifies me to death! I really had to take a deep breath at the end of this. Amazing entry!
ReplyDeleteOh man, I want to know more!!
ReplyDeleteYikes! What is going to happen next? *shudders* Nice.
ReplyDeleteUnleashing the Dreamworld
Amazing entry, Laura! Thanks for participating in Spooktoberfest!
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