And now . . . (drumroll)
It's time once again for Five Sentence Fiction! The goal is to pack a punch in a mere five sentences using a weekly prompt. Challenge accepted!
The prompt Lillie provided this week is ANGLES.
To read the entire "Unchained" story from the beginning, go to this PAGE.
To read the entire "Unchained" story from the beginning, go to this PAGE.
Unchained
Chapter
28: Angles
of Observation
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Ylana looked at him with a mixture of sympathy and wonder,
dazzled by the many faces of his character she’d been able to observe over the
course of the alcohol-saturated evening.
Having started as the neatly dressed gentleman she’d first met, entropy soon
began to rear its head, and as the pendulum of emotion swung him through moments
of outrage, past hints of seeming indifference, and into prolonged moments of
heart-broken longing, the toll the extremes took on him could not be denied.
“This may not make you feel any better,” Nara said
soothingly, “but after learning about the grizzly things Myrandia has done, I
can’t help but conclude that you’re ultimately going to be better off without
her.”
This is fabulous. I love the description you use. Are you incorporating each week's 5SF into a bigger story? I'd thought to try to do that, but not sure I'll manage it! So far mine are discreet stories. Nice to come across your blog. Will follow with GFC xx
ReplyDeleteYes I am. I wasn't sure if I'd be able to do it either, but it seems to be working out so far. Thanks for following!
DeleteWhat a great #FSF. Thoroughly enjoyed your words!
ReplyDeleteLove your entry in this weeks 5SF.
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