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Reprogramming
the Rebellion
Adam didn’t know how to respond. He gaped at Layla, trying to decide why she
would choose to focus this on him. Does she actually think my story is that
compelling, or is there something else motivating her?
The Great Orator nodded thoughtfully. At least from a human perspective, it looked
like a thoughtful nod. Adam truthfully couldn’t
be certain, because he knew virtually nothing of Vaaldeen culture.
“That is an efficient title,” the Great Orator said at
last. “It accomplishes a lot in a clever
way. Thank you for your input, Ms.
Garrison.”
The Knights of the Order of Knitting all raised their
knitting needles in salute. Sir Edwin
stood. “I think I speak for all of my
brothers when I say that Ms. Garrison’s suggested title is perfect. We approve.”
George nodded dismissively.
“If using that name is what gets us to move on to other matters, then by
all means, let’s use it.”
The name was officially approved. However, the Vaaldeen still had to come up
with a name that would work with their native language. This order of business took much longer. The Great Orator, having greater familiarity
with this own language, couldn’t accept any proposals from his people without
picking them apart. He was also just as
hard on his own ideas. Adam and his
fellow humans, none of whom could understand a word of what they were now
saying, had to sit through the entire painful ordeal.
At one point, Adam leaned over and whispered to Layla, “I
feel like I’m about to drown in my own boredom.”
Layla leaned over and smiled. She hovered only a couple of inches away, and
Adam’s senses became clouded her proximity.
“If you do, take me with you. It
would have to be better than this.”
“Be careful,” he warned playfully. “We’ll start sounding like George in a
minute.”
“I can hear you, you know,” George interjected.
Everyone else in the room seemed to be ignoring the three of
them, so they talked amongst themselves while a heated debate about word choice
continued around them. Adam personally
wished that George hadn’t joined their conversation, though this feeling had
nothing to do with any ill will held toward the man. He simply wanted to have Layla to himself.
At long last, the Great Orator gave approval to some kind of
name composed of alien syllables that made no sense to Adam’s ears. They moved on to the real planning that would
compose the actual bulk of their mission.
As it turned out, Layla had a suggestion for that too. “Bibble wants to get a hold of the
nanotechnology, but I’ve managed to keep it from him so far. I have access to all the nanobots we could
ever need, and I think I should give Bibble what he wants.” A mildly maniacal laugh escaped her
lips. “After they’ve been properly
reprogrammed, of course.”
Proceed to entry S.
Proceed to entry S.
Reprogrammed! Clever girl.
ReplyDeleteInteresting story fragment. After my NaNo madness, I will go back and read from the beginning.
ReplyDeleteOne small point, though - do the human characters know for sure that the Valdeens are talking about language choices, or could they be talking about what they had for dinner, or the stink of human in the room, or the latest Valdeen fad....?
Language barriers can present interesting plot twists.... =)
Nice to meet you on the A to Z trail - I, too, am posting a story series this month! You can find me at http://shanjeniahstruebornjottings.wordpress.com/blogging-from-a-to-z-april-challenge1/
Loving this story...
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